THE TRUE FRIENDSHIP
Once in a life time
you will find a friend
who touches not only your heart
but also your soul
Once in a life time
you discover someone
who stands beside you,
not over you
Once in a life time
if you are lucky
you find someone
as I have found you
Very special people
We can be ourselves with,
talk with lough with ,
hope and believe with....
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At the beginning of the 20 centuries, cigarette was most popular in the world. People start smoking for a variety of different reasons. Some think that it looks cool and just for killing time. Others start because their family members or friends smoke. But now smoking is the important thing for life style,or just to make their body relax. Statistic shows that about 9 to 10 tobacco users start smoking before they're 18 years old. Most adults who started smoking in their teens never expected to become addicted. That's why people say it's just so much easier not to start smoking at all.
More than 65% citizen in our country is a smoker. Men, women, adults and also the children have bad habit become a professional smoker. They consume in average pack of cigarette every day. If they have to choose between cigarette and food, I think they will choose the cigarette. Even though everyone knows that smoking causes cancer, emphysema, and heart disease; that it can shorten your life by 10 years or more; and that the habit can cost a smoker million of money a year.
Smoking is a hard habit to break because tobacco contains nicotine, which is highly addictive. Even though smoking is dangerous for our body but it’s very difficult to avoid that. If someone starts to smoking, he/she will be very difficult to go away from smoking (cigarette).
The body doesn't need tobacco the way it needs food, water, sleep/rest, and exercise. In fact, many of chemicals in cigarettes, like nicotine and cyanide are actually poisons that can kill in high enough doses. And the consequences of this poisoning happen gradually. I thing every one knows, in the long term smoking can make their body/healthy weak or get another disease likes; cancer, lung damage, organ disease, and heart disease. This case can be very fatal for our healthy because it will make the person limited in ability to be normal life.
Otherwise, the cigarette factory is the highest pay for tax in our country. Tax from cigarette factory can add income for our country. If the government prohibit smoking to all of citizen, it can be decreased of income and make the national economic unstable. Besides that the worker/employee may be loose their jobs. There is the hardest choice for the government to make conclusion.
Finally all forms of tobacco (cigarettes, pipes, cigars, and smokeless tobacco) are hazardous for our body. So we have to “say no smoking”. I think that is the best motto to avoid from smoking. And if you want to stop from smoking, you can try gradually and step by step. We know that it is very hard to stop smoking so “don’t give up”. Free from cigarette will give you a lot of benefit like; more energy, better performance, more money, more handsome, more masculine and in the long time give us more life.
Diposkan oleh ANUNG di 08:13 0 komentar
Senin, 2008 Oktober 06
Your writing is ok but in some part, the subject still missing in action so you have to be carefull.
For this writing your score still the same with your mistest 55 but I'm sure by practicing alot you will get improvement.
LEBARAN DAY (IDUL FITRI)
Lebaran day is the day for the winner who finished 30 days fasting. It is the most important day for the muslims because lebaran day is the victory day, joyous moment, and to forgive all of our mistake. On this day every Muslim celebrates the joyous moment of their return to purity (the literal meaning of the Idul Fitri). This is not something that should be understood only in a symbolic sense, but to some extent it also appears to have physical manifestation during the time of lebaran.
This year Idul fitri falls on the first day of October.In that day all of muslims started to celebrate the lebaran day.First, At 06.15 am (local time) We prayed to God in “ sholat sunnah 2 rakaats”. We prayed in a large field and wear the new clothes. Men, women, adult, and the chhildren join with that activity enthusiasly.At that time, The Chief of Religion department become “imam “ (the leader of sholat). Besides praying to God the “Imam” gave us sermon about 30 minutes. And the theme was “how to make our life easy and peace to get the heaven”. It was very interesting for us because, every muslim want to be good human.
After the activity finished, we went back to our home for asking forgiveness to the family members. It started from wife to her husband and then the children to the parent. Next, we went to mosque for “halal bihalal” with our neihgbor. Thereafter, our family went to grandparents house. In this place we met all of families ; uncles, aunts, cousins, niece, and etc. We share our experience about our jobs, talk about our children, school, and etc. We apologized each other and finally so we didn’t have sin anymore.
One of Indonesian unique tradition is to celebrate Lebaran Day by going to their hometown or we call it “mudik”. Every person want to go to their home town to met their families, friends, close relatives, etc. Eventhough they just have limit time to call on their families because of their job.
And the other tradition is about special food of Lebaran Day. Indonesian people always make “opor ayam and ketupat” in lebaran day and it’s very popular in our country. Besides food and wearing new clothes, the children receive a lot of money from their parents, grand parents, uncle and other close relatives.
Conclusion ...........
Diposkan oleh ANUNG di 06:47 0 komentar
Label: LEBARAN
Sabtu, 2008 September 13
The people who wear the military uniform have big responsibility for their job, corps, nation and family. Every soldier has to be professional, dicipline and always obey the roles. No mistake for the missions, because if any mistaken in their mission it means the mission will be fall down and they can be killed by the enemy.
If the soldiers killed in the beattle, the family would be very sad. Wife, children and their parent will be sad if they hear the bad news. Everyday all of the family always pray to God to their safety. I can't imagine how the wife response, if she gets bad news from the office. I think they will be very shock.
Conclusion............
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SOCCER IS THE MOST EXITING SPORT
Soccer or football is the most exiting sport in the world, because almost every people like this sport. In this game there are 11 main players and 12 the secondary players who joined in one team. The team consis of 2 strikers, 2 wing players, 2 middle players, 4 persons for back players and 1 goal keeper. Every team have a coach and a coach assistant, their job are make the team strong, give the best strategy and finally the team is win in every match. Measurement of the soccer land is 50 meters multiply 110 meters.
Four times a week the club have to doing the exercise to maintain skill and then the coach apply new strategy for his team. This sport is similar to the arm forces, it cause they have same strategy how to lose the enemy. The team have to warming up before exercises. First, every player runs slowlly 4 times arround the field and then sprint for 200 meters. Second, they must run combained with drible the ball. This training is used to escape from the enemy and attack the enemy zone to get point/goal. Third, the have to train their ability of passing. For example cheest/ dada pass, food pass, and heading pass. The most important is every player must be have ability tocreate the goal, especially for the striikers and wings player. Because they are the arrow of the team.
I think all of the world citizen know about the role of soccer game. There are two team with elevent players, one refree and two refree lines. The chief in this game is refree, so all of the players have to obey the role. If the players do the danger activity like tackle and sliding, they will get yelow card or red card (twice get fall). If hands ball near the keeper zone, they will get punishment ( finalty shoot, it’s about 12 meters from the goal keeper). The time is 90 minutes for this game, it’s devided in two part (45 minutes to every part).
There are many kinds of the soccer competition, It beginning from local league, domestic league, champions league (league for the winner in every domestic league) and the most exiting is the world championship. All of the soccer maniac in the world will consentrate to follow the championship. Bisides that some times the supporters wear their maskot costum. They will support their team to be the winner, all out.
However, soccer is the most interesting and exiting sport. Because this game can makes many income for football club (management, coach and player), FIFA (Federation International Football Association), TV stations, news papers, shoes and clothes factory (adidas, reebok, puma, spalding, nike, etc), soft drink factory (gattorade, pepsi, etc), public transportations, hotels and so on. Every week they get income more than one billion, because of this game. All of them will be the rich man in the world.
All in all ssoccer is one of the profesional sport. This game is the most interesting sport in the world, because some times it makes the world citizen crazy of soccer. So this is good property to the bisnis and new future to profesional player. Finally, soccer can makes peace in the world because all of player and supporter come together in one place and they enjoy with this macth.
Diposkan oleh ANUNG di 16:13 0 komentar
Lt. Anung,for the last two stories do you make it by yourself or copy it from internet ?
Don't forget to make conclusion, next time try to arrange the story base on the rule of writing: opening, body, and conclusion.
Your score is 55
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